A Pathetic Life:Survive the high school by pnguyen22

Review by funkyspunk90

I'm guessing English isn't the author's first language, because there are tons of writing mistakes constantly.
Incredibly short - basically you just make 1 decision, and then it ends or you die randomly.

Review by Hormus

I really like this. It's short, very creative, and also gives you an air of mystery. The reason I like short ones is because you don't waste your time wandering around from one room to another, with no idea of what's going on. I created my first game, "Doctor You", just a few minutes ago. Keep up the good work! ;)

Review by Regisblackgaard

sorry for the 2 stars kid.
1. this could better as a textadventure, but then maybe not. you choose!
2. this is one of the games where you make a random choice and hope it is the right one. those games SUCK and are extremely boring/frustrating.
3. basically i look out a window and die. WOOOOOW
4. TOOOOO SHORT
5. great writing, otherwise would be a 1 star. its really like a 2.5 stars, but you REALLY REALLY want a story where the person finishes and feels like they havent wasted 30 minutes (or seconds in your case) and have instead actually had fun.

i suggest you put this back in the WIP category, and perhaps put all your chapters in the same game. that way it would be longer, more enjoyable at the end, and we would all enjoy more of your great writing.