can you hear me? by khygann

Horror

because somebody hated my LAST creepypasta based text adventure I made this and worked ALL DAY on it i am not joking!

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Review by Ehamzic13

17 Aug 2013

Dude, khygann, whats the point, i see no direction in this story, but starting in the woods is ok, what about that u make an other story of like living whit the creepypastas, that sally brings u to them, and that u have a like roleplay whit them for him/her.
Email me on ehamzic@live.nl if someone wants some help whit ideas, i have LOTS of them.
So need help, i help!

Review by MAD SPANNER

24 Jul 2013

Lacks flair and style, but functional. It gets the basics down, but nothing more. The short length means there's added incentive to quickly play again, but you will still get a very average experience.

Review by DuckManBrian

24 Jul 2013

Couldn't get into the "story" as it just seems very random at times and doesn't have a real direction. Lacks imagination and doesn't pull the reader in to it at all.