The Intruder by ChickenManBird

Review by emmodii

So basically, all the choices lead to "your dead". It's not even grammatically correct...

Well, at least it's short enough that restarting to go through all the choices wasn't such a pain in the ass.

Review by VideoGamer

Ok to start off, the game has a nice look to it but the lack of variety in endings is kinda sad. Especially since its a quest game. Also, if your going to have a game with just 1 ending, then make a game with a good and convincing story that will feed the reader throughout.

Review by yaycats

I love how every time you die it says "your dead", but other than that it's not all that good

Review by LeisureSuit Larry

O.O player has attribute = difficulty spelling.
I "thing" @gameSoul missed a few, maybe it's my "inmagination"
the lack of a good ending is also worrying, The angel of death lurks round every corner. I would have loved to have checked the cupboard for a weapon like a metal baseball bat before pushing it in front of the door.

Review by broadwaydude

I'm a bit disappointed on how short the game is. I would really love more of this.

Review by gameSoul

Built alright, provides a desire to try again when you fail. That said, the (spoilers) inability to win no matter what is somewhat disappointing. Also, "you're" not "your". Other than that grammar is fairly decent.