The Woman Who Wanted To Love: A (short) Fable by John_Daily

Horror

This is a creepy little tale I wrote a number of years ago, while playing with the rhythm of the words and the fable format. I think it actually makes a better gamebook than a short story. Enjoy!

Created with Squiffy
Version History:
1.1 (4 Oct. 2015)
-added more interactivity at the story's end
1.0 (3 Oct. 2015)

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Review by Aondriel

21 Sep 2023

Oh how the turns tabled at the end

Review by SilverStone the dragon

06 Sep 2019

Good, but quite sad. Didn't expect that ending!

Review by Siena

06 Sep 2019

great story line I really like it👏🤩

Review by PureClover6711

15 Aug 2018

Wow, twist ending. The one thing that made me not give it five stars was the format, I found it a little clunky, and the changing of the words halfway through each section made it a little tricky for me. I loved the story though! It was very dark :)
I do suggest maybe using less passages, and maybe switch to twine? Otherwise the story was very good.

Review by Pompomlife

16 May 2018

It was amazing