Monsters by Magic Orange

Review by mentlegen

again limiting the choices even if this is a choice game if you pick a choice it wont do anything and you will die that is not a choice game then only if you make a really bad choice then you should die

Review by Ekename

I like this, it's got some real potential, but it feels like it would be better as maybe a text adventure rather than a game book, just for the fact of searching through the mystery house.

Review by Mango art

It has good potential, but I didn't like how the only successful choices were to fight. And I felt like you didn't humanize the hoarders enough, I find it unrealistic that they would shoot you for trying to do what they told you to do.

Review by DaNiX88

This is great for your first game! I really liked the atmosphere and progression! It was fairly descriptive, but not drawn out, making it feel very fast-paced! I'm very looking forward to play the next game and see what progress you've made as a gamebook writer.

Try to make the game a little bit longer!

Review by MisterPibb316

Victor summed this one well. It has the feel of a short tech demo that was publicly released as a game.

Review by HakuMasarugi

I personally liked the game a lot, and can't wait to play the rest of the games in the series. I really do hope that this turns out to be a long, great game that I could share with my friends. Definite bookmark for this one, though.

Review by victorgijsbers

Raise your hand if you have ever played a game with this premise: "Almost everybody in the world has turned into zombies. You have to search for weapons, defend yourself against attacking hordes, and meet up with some other survivors because there might be strength in numbers ... if you can trust them."

Now raise your hand if you've lost count of how many games with that premise you have played.

Right. I wonder why people want to remake the same game over and over again. Surely it is more fun to write something with at least some originality? But here we have another bog standard zombie game. It is not helped by bad spelling and writing, by having little content, and by having few if any meaningful choices. Best avoided.

Review by causualplayer1

the best of writing, thanks.

Review by bloodietoes

The game was pretty good. I liked the choices when you were fighting the zombies. Can't wait to play the others.

Review by TheHatMan

Not bad, I liked the choices.