Fantasy
Comedy
Horror
Educational
Sci-Fi
Mystery
Puzzle
Simulation
Surreal
RPG
Slice of Life
Historical
Literature
Romance
Seasonal
This is the beta test version of our new website.
Some features may not work as expected, and some pages may be missing.
Please report anything broken on
Discord
or
GitHub Discussions.
Or, switch to our main website here.
The Last Heroes chapter 0 by Dekuopa
This game was added to the Sandpit for the following reason: Too short
This game is too short to be put into a category. Players expect games not to be all over within a few seconds.
This game is too short to be put into a category. Players expect games not to be all over within a few seconds.
Sandpit
First chapter of a long story
Review
by TTPeriod
19 Jul 2015
There is some capitalisation errors, and when someone speaks, you usually start a new paragraph, I think? Otherwise, you'll be fine. I also want to point out a spelling error-- this is how you spell unconsciousness.
I don't get the story fully yet, be sure to make the challenge/problem clear.