Bad Business by Phoenixinterceptor

A man with famous Background, Play in the role of a Business man who is up to protect his family as a mysterious Mr.P. threatens to hurt them if He doesn't Play his Little game.
Review by GameofChocolate
29 Jul 2017
Great story, very suspenseful. You need someone to edit your word tenses though (it's cut not cutted, for example.) and I wish the story was longer, and maybe a few more choices, but in the overall, I think it was an excellent short game. :)