The Landlady by JWyld4

This game was added to the Sandpit for the following reason: Too short

This game is too short to be put into a category. Players expect games not to be all over within a few seconds.

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It is about a boy named Billy and he stops a the very weird bed and breakfast and how he figures out when to leave.

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Review by JohnChhana

05 Jun 2014

Good writing, but I've played the game twice and found that I could make only two decisions in entirety. Isn't the point of the game to allow the player to affect the outcome as much as he can? Maybe you can try fragmentation more as the story is good and would do better with more branching. Oh, and an entire paragraph is not a good choice for..well, a choice. Try simple ones like 'go left' or 'do this/that'; then you can use the paragraph to describe what happens.

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Added 02 Jun 2014