Phase of Principle by VertMaster
Have you ever wondered what would happen if...
That's what you're going to find out. This multi-chapter adventure cannot be witnessed in one playthrough, and would need to be played multiple times to get the full story. Good luck!
*Fixed grammar.
*Added background color.
*Sneak preview of next chapter.
That's what you're going to find out. This multi-chapter adventure cannot be witnessed in one playthrough, and would need to be played multiple times to get the full story. Good luck!
*Fixed grammar.
*Added background color.
*Sneak preview of next chapter.
Review
by TakingFlyte
21 Sep 2015
I'm very impressed with how this turned out. Good storyline, but two things could be improved on. The grammar, and the background colors. To keep your reader's interest, you may want to add in a nice color scheme to capture their eyes, and good grammar for them to understand it well. The characters are very good, and I hope to see a good amount of character development here. You've done a good job. :)
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