Monsters: Apocalypse by Magic Orange

Review by GameofChocolate

It could be better if it wasn't for the "your choice yielded nothing" options, and then when I try to not be a douchebag to the guy with the truck, I die.I felt like i was being guided rather than offered a game.

Review by snazzy ray

The story is really good; you should really give more choices though.

Review by DaNiX88

You are showing signs of improvement, but please, please, please fix your grammar errors! I really like the pace of this game, and you have a knack for writing this style of game. The best part is if you die, you don't have to start over. My one piece of advice though is that you should try make the different options matter. Like, if I choose to say one thing, then the relationship between Alex and me changes for the rest of the game.
I understand this is hard for games separated in sequels, etc. so if you are interested, you should merge the small games into a larger, and more complex game, if you're interested!

The style is getting better, but the many grammar mistakes and streamlined choices are holding me back from giving a higher rating!

However, I'm still highly anticipating the next game!! Good work.

Review by RaptorFace

The awsomest story ever!!!!! KEEP UP THE AMAZING WORK!!!!!!

Review by I.Q Incorporated

The Story is ok, but hard to follow. What I mean is 1. the character interaction between the main character and Alex. Like it hard to see what type of character we are, if we don't know "who" we are and if we had more insight on what type of person Alex is. 2. Another thing I kinda have a problem with is what type of zombies are they facing, because the Zombies/Monsters seem to be slow moving but in large groups or are they fast? Idk It'll be nice if you clear that up too. 3. My last problem is I don't what the story about? Like what is our main character goals? (other than to find food) . Other than I think you make this better. Of course I'm going to read 2 and 3. Thanks For Reading

Review by Kdbg32

Good grammar and plot to keep the story carry in great best text game I've played on here very good job

Review by Renagrade

Awesome! I thoroughly enjoyed the game! I'm leaving a review because you asked me to :)

First of all, the writing was great! I thought that the interactions between characters was very real and down to earth. I like the action too.

The choices were a little bit limited at times, but as a Gamebook writing myself, I can understand how that happens. I would love to see one with a lot more options than the one you have here.

Still, the lack of choices wasn't enough to take it down from the rating I had in mind. I'll probably be playing part 2 soon! Feel free to check out my game too :)

Review by Dingo_12

Very cool sequel. btw please check out my game "3 months later"

Review by causualplayer1

that was fun

Review by LeoGrave

Love the character development and possible romance between the main character and Alex. Amazing job ^^ 5 stars!